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Platinum MBA Personal Statement Consulting Package

Experience the benefits of a comprehensive editing service tailored to your needs.

Get assistance from the very first step. Writing a strong and convincing personal statement requires much forethought, preparation, and planning. You should take charge of the writing process from the beginning by enlisting the invaluable guidance of a Sibia consultant. This way, you can be sure that you are moving in the right direction and improving upon each subsequent draft of your personal statements for your business school applications.

Sibia navigates you through the brainstorming and writing process. The Platinum MBA Personal Statement Consulting Package offered by Sibia provides you with precisely the feedback and information that enable you to wow admissions officers with your personal statements. We know you don’t have a lot of time to waste, so maximize your time and potential by working closely with your Sibia consultant to perfect your essays.

What You Receive

  • Initial consulting, brainstorming and outlining session via Skype/phone or chat; MBA Consultant studies your completed Questionnaire beforehand
  • Continued collaboration with MBA Consultant via email as needed to develop statement outline
  • Two individual comprehensive reviews of personal statement(s), including input on structure, content, style and grammar and a detailed summary overview
  • Following each review, a redline version presenting your Consultant's suggestions and edits, and a fully proofed "clean" copy incorporating these changes
  • Unlimited email support following each comprehensive review
  • A third review provides a thorough proofreading and polish, and an additional week of email support.
  • Option of standard (48 hours) or expedited (24 hours) delivery for each review

Details / Timeline

Complete the Questionnaire

Place an order, choosing the number of words based upon how many personal statement(s) you will complete, and you'll immediately receive our detailed Admissions Questionnaire. Fill it out and return it to us to provide your MBA admissions consultant key information regarding your academic background, work history and extracurricular activities. We'll then set up your phone/skype brainstorming and outlining session.

Personal Statement                                              Brainstorming & Outlining

Prior to meeting for the brainstorming and outlining session, your Sibia MBA consultant will have carefully reviewed your responses to the Questionnaire. Knowledgeable of your applicant profile, your consultant will have prepared potential approaches for your personal statement for discussion. The two of you will then outline your MBA essay(s) during the hour-long session.

Complete Drafts of Personal Statement(s)                   Submit to Your MBA Consultant

Write your initial draft(s) and submit them to your MBA consultant.  She will thoroughly critique, edit and proofread your essay(s) and improve their structure, flow and grammar.   She will untangle any awkward phrases and return your personal statement(s) by the method you requested: via email or secure download to your account within 48 or 24 hours.

Extensive Feedback                                                     Actionable Advice

For each essay you submit, you will receive a redline version which shows you exactly what your consultant recommended to adjust, add or strike out. A detailed summary at the end of the redline version will provide an in-depth overview of the strengths and weaknesses of your MBA essay(s). In addition, you will receive a fully proofed "clean" copy of each personal statement that has already incorporated our recommended changes.

Review, Re-edit and Re-Submit

After carefully reviewing your MBA consultant's recommended changes, make appropriate changes and feel free to email your consultant if you have any questions. Once you've revised your personal statement(s), re-submit them to your editor for another thorough critique, editing and proofreading session. She'll return your MBA essay(s) back again within 48 or 24 hours, as you had originally selected.

Final Proofread and Polish                                          Additional Email Support

For this last stage, make additional changes, ask any further questions of your consultant and then submit your MBA personal statement(s) a third time for a final Proofread and Polish. Your consultant will perfect your essay(s) and return final redline and clean copies within 48 or 24 hours. You'll receive an additional 7 days of email support to ask any questions of your consultant.


Select from two delivery options: each essay is reviewed and returned in 48 hours with Standard Delivery, or in 24 hours with Accelerated Delivery.

Word Count Standard Price Accelerated Price
0-250 $360 $450
251-500 $390 $485
501-750 $420 $525
751 - 1000 $450 $560
1001 - 1500 $498 $620
1501 - 2000 $546 $679
2001 - 2500 $594 $740
2501 - 3000 $642 $799
3001 - 4000 $690 $860
4000+ Contact us for a quote

Our Guarantee

Sibia's Platinum Package offers the most comprehensive and thorough MBA personal statement consulting service available for MBA applicants. Given the experience and knowledge of our consultants, we guarantee that you will be pleased with their services as well.  If you are in any way dissatisfied, however, please contact us so that we can resolve the issue immediately. Should you remain unhappy with our service, you will of course receive a full refund or free credit for another Sibia package. Get closer to being admitted to the business school of your choice by contacting Sibia today!

Let us provide you with in-depth brainstorming, editing and proofreading support.

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